We recently launched our landing page for Componently, an Asset Management platform for Software Components! https://www.componently.com/.
Would love to hear your feedback! Is the value proposition clear? Could you explain in your own words what the problem is we’re solving and how?
It describes the "what" but not the "how" and only scratches the surface of why the reader should care.
To persuade anyone to change their behavior three components come into play:
1) personal benefit
2) dramatic difference
3) reason to believe
Dramatic difference is 50%+ different, not 20%. Reason to believe is usually pretty easy. Most people get about halfway into personal benefit. It's frequently the lack of a dramatic difference that halts the persuasion effort.